Diary of a Mall Girl by Luisa Plaja
So many good things happen in this chapter! The characters are getting more developed, and you start to find out more about certain characters, especially Molly's brother Jamie and also Molly's new friend Jewel. Jewel is still very mysterious but each chapter we find out a little bit more about her. The story so far is keeping me on tender hooks, ending with a dramatic cliff-hanger each time! I don't think I could live without this story in my life!! :)
Soul Shadows by Alex Woolfe
Woah, I didn't see that coming! Possibly the most dramatic, tension-building, unusual story I have ever read. This chapter leaves many questions un-answered - why do the creatures develop? Why were they made in the first place? Is Derek really nice or is he acting? This is absolutely amazing! I really felt like I was there in the story and it is so brilliantly written. I can't wait to read more!
The Last Symbol by Rebecca Morton
I'm really enjoying this story so far! It's quite unusual and sometimes a little confusing, but it's amazing :) I think this story could do with a bit more explanation in places; otherwise it's great. I'd really like to know what happens to Miko - I can't wait for the next chapter!
Unfortunately next week will be my last week reviewing the Fiction Express chapters as I don't have enough money for credits to keep reviewing them. Don't worry though, you can find other FE reviews on the website!